Hi Liam, What a lot of amazing choices and work for you to do!! Did it take you a long time. It was great to see you writing down your math thinking using symbols. I enjoyed the picture of the ice cream in your poem. Did you think of that yourself or did you borrow the idea from someone?? Keep up the great thinking.
I agree with Mr Cossey. You've shown detailed thinking for your Maths. You've also correctly identified two uses of personification in the poem. The other two are 'debate' and 'complains' since these are human actions. 'Travelling' doesn't quite count because non-human things can travel as well, like animals. Good effort!
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Great job Liam.
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It was great to see you writing down your math thinking using symbols.
I enjoyed the picture of the ice cream in your poem. Did you think of that yourself or did you borrow the idea from someone??
Keep up the great thinking.
I agree with Mr Cossey. You've shown detailed thinking for your Maths. You've also correctly identified two uses of personification in the poem. The other two are 'debate' and 'complains' since these are human actions. 'Travelling' doesn't quite count because non-human things can travel as well, like animals. Good effort!
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