Hi Liam, in slide 1, you have added evidence to support your thinking by describing the skills that you learn in video games. Your graph is also clear, with two side-by-side bar charts to compare the response of girls and boys. Remember to add a title for your y-axis - 'Number of students'. I saw that your favourite game is Minecraft, what is your favourite mode?
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Hi Liam, in slide 1, you have added evidence to support your thinking by describing the skills that you learn in video games. Your graph is also clear, with two side-by-side bar charts to compare the response of girls and boys. Remember to add a title for your y-axis - 'Number of students'. I saw that your favourite game is Minecraft, what is your favourite mode?
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