Hi Liam, you have correctly identified the point of view in slide 7 and 8 using pronouns, well done. When 3rd person is used, it means that the narrator is telling the story. To decide what the author is wanting the reader to feel, search through the text to look for words that stir up emotion. For example, in slide 8, what do the words 'broken', 'deserted', 'shattered' make you feel? If you are not too sure, have a look on the slides in the Kauri Hub blog.
Great to see you challenging yourself in Maths on slide 19. You have a good understanding of the tenths, hundredths and thousandths place value. Just double check your addition in the final solution, it is adding up to 4.255. Can you adjust the numbers to bring it down to 4.253?
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Hi Liam, you have correctly identified the point of view in slide 7 and 8 using pronouns, well done. When 3rd person is used, it means that the narrator is telling the story. To decide what the author is wanting the reader to feel, search through the text to look for words that stir up emotion. For example, in slide 8, what do the words 'broken', 'deserted', 'shattered' make you feel? If you are not too sure, have a look on the slides in the Kauri Hub blog.
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you challenging yourself in Maths on slide 19. You have a good understanding of the tenths, hundredths and thousandths place value. Just double check your addition in the final solution, it is adding up to 4.255. Can you adjust the numbers to bring it down to 4.253?