Excellent effort Liam! I really enjoyed your writing and how Aotearoa looks like a giant sea creature from the ocean. Reminds me of the amazing animation you made in year 3 recreating Maui fishing up the North Island!
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Excellent effort Liam! I really enjoyed your writing and how Aotearoa looks like a giant sea creature from the ocean. Reminds me of the amazing animation you made in year 3 recreating Maui fishing up the North Island!
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