Hi, liam it is Olive. I like how you described it. But... Something you could change is, you could say how it dose stuff. For example, The way it sleeps... What dose it eat and how?...
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Hi, liam it is Olive.
ReplyDeleteI like how you described it.
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Something you could change is, you could say how it dose stuff. For example, The way it sleeps... What dose it eat and how?...
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It doesn't sleep or eat
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