Great to see you using pictures and clear instructions. I liked that each instruction was short and clear. Perhaps, a next step would be to explain how this will help people in survival or creative.
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Wow Liam, this is so cool! How did you learn how to build this?
ReplyDeleteYour instructions are very clear, especially with the step-by-step pictures.
Great to see you using pictures and clear instructions. I liked that each instruction was short and clear. Perhaps, a next step would be to explain how this will help people in survival or creative.
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