Thanos point of view in infinity war
Thanos sets off to get another ship for space since Iron Man in 2014 made a nuke go into it and exploded the ship.
2018 came along with Thanose in his new ship light years away from earth. Then he sends off his army to collect the infinity stones since he got to from thor and hulk. While he waits for his army to get the stones and come back. Thanos gets Gamora and her sister(sorry I forgot her name) and houcks up the sister to some memory cords to see if she knows where one of the stones are, and she does.
So now Thanos and Gamora are going to the stone. Now that Thanos and Gamora have to climb a tall mountain with a big rock type of wall, while they get close to the top of it...Red Skull appears! And says the mother of Gamoral, then he says that a loved one has to fall off a cliff on the mountain and Thanos look at Gamora with tears dripping down his cheek so he throws Gamora off the cliff.
Thanos gets the stone lying down in water. Next thanos sends all of his army to earth where black panther is to get the last stone, a few hours has past and still no stone so Thanos go there and gets the last stone and when he’s about to snap thor throws his axe a Thanoses hart but Thanos says *You should of went for the head* then snaps, so now half of earth's population is gone and its been done and that's it.
(sorry if I forgot most of it I didn't remember)
Hi Liam, you have put a lot of effort into this writing about heroes and villains. I wonder what Thanos was thinking as he was trying to get those infinity stones. I haven't seen any of the Avengers movies, so it was quite good to read your writing because it helped me to know more about Infinity War.
ReplyDeleteHi Liam, you've included lots of characters here. I like all the details you've added in your plot, such as going up the mountain to find the stone, Thanos pushing Gamora off the cliff, the battle between Thanos and and Thor. These details make your story interesting. My favourite line was "tears dripping down his cheek". You've used the show not tell strategy to show us Thanos' sadness, ka pai.
ReplyDeleteTry using past tense when you are writing a narrative. To add dialogue to your story, try using speech marks like this:
Thanos says, "You should've went for the head."
I'd also be interested to see the setting looks like. When Gamora was on the cliff, did she feel the whipping wind? Did she hear the cry of seagulls? Did she smell the saltiness of the sea?